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TAKEN Without Consent (drkfetyshnyghts)


TAKEN Without Consent by drkfetyshnyghts

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Maggie is a statuesque redhead, a successful businesswoman and a single mother. She shares the closest of relationships with her teenage daughter Melody that it is possible to share. Pure undiluted mother love. Then out of the blue Melody is snatched – taken without consent – and Maggie's world falls apart. She assumes very wrongly that there will be a ransom demand. She has more money than she could ever spend and she would gladly pay up if that were the case. Then the little clip videos start to arrive by email, of Melody suffering in a variety of harrowing ways. And the bizarre, fetish tinged instructions that she herself has to carry out to the letter, or witness Melody suffer even deeper torments. Maggie's psychological decimation and Melody's physical and sexual torments are the strings that run through this 2 part story. It becomes clear that Melody isn't the victim, she is simply collateral damage. The objective is to destroy Maggie from within and control her completely..

Product type: EBook    Published by: Fiction4All    Published: 11 / 2015

No. words: 34412

Style: Fem Dom - F/F, Bondage/BDSM Fetishes

Available Formats: Palm  MobiPocket (MOBI)  EPUB  Sony Reader (LRF)  PDF  MS Reader  This book has a format which can be downloaded to Kindle


Excerpt

From the side profile view she looked young, very young. But then it was difficult to determine any kind of age because her face was twisted, and contorted more than a little. Something wasn't right – she was distressed. Utterly distressed. She had been through something – a process or something like that. From the look on her face she was frightened. But that was like a fright that had been instilled a long time ago and now there was something else wrong with her. Or something else had been piled on top of that fright.
As the camera moved around this young girl's head it was clear that she was suffering in some way or another. In several ways actually. But the suffering was on several layers. There was that fright there – maybe even a fear for her life. A deeper fear. Certainly a fear that told that she didn't want to be, REALLY didn't want to be in that place right now. She had a thick mane of hair but that was all matted, and dripping. It was hard to tell the colour of her hair because there was all sorts of weird lights dancing around from the background, from above and from below. But her hair was wet because she had been, or was sweating. She was dripping with sweat from some kind of effort that was being put in. Or that had been put in.
But then there was even more to it than that. Her face was trembling as well. Like she was suffering something else. Like she was going through an ordeal. Her face was drenched with a mixture of sweat and tears. And there was little streaks, dark streaks from her eyes where her mascara had run down. There was a sense that this girl was intensely pretty. A pretty girl, even though her face was twisted and contorted to almost ugly standards as a result of some nightmare of torment, or other.
“Nooooo, no please don't do this to me. Mum, mum please mum help me mum.”
She got the words out and at first they shocked to the core. Firstly the words, how they were spoken. How they spilled wetly from her trembling lips. But then the tone. The tone of that voice was one of real fear and fright. It kind of underlined how scared she was when she was first seen. It wasn't right though – this girl begging like this. And the thing was she was begging. Begging and pleading. That she was begging for her mum to come get her made it all even more harrowing. It made it all the more cruel to be even invading this poor girl's privacy like this.
The shaky camera pulled out a little bit. It might have been shaky but the images were high definition digital. Kind of a new slant on an old theme. As the camera pulled out it was clear there were ropes going up into the blackness in front of this girl. The way the lights danced and rotated, it was like those ropes were caught off guard from time to time. Like skinny little kids being caught doing things they shouldn't have been doing. There was no doubt that with this young girl in such close proximity, that these ropes somehow looked 'guilty'. They were guilty of course because they were taking part in this young girl's torment, and trauma. Her hands were in front of her tightly bound at the wrists. It was like those wrists had been bound like that for effect. The thick rope wound round and round tightly around tiny wrists. The slender fingers looking frail as they curled and uncurled. The hands slightly blue because of the pressure of the rope.
Her hands were suspended in front of her. Right in front of her face. And she had to stay still because although she could put downward pressure on her wrists, if she shook, or trembled too much then she would lose her balance. The camera pulled out more. She was naked except for a pair of over the knee socks and a pair of high heels that could not have belonged to her. They were proper grown up heels and this girl looked like she was barely out of her Mary Jane's. It was as though whoever had put this girl into this predicament was making a crude, almost unforgivable attempt to make the girl look older. Or perhaps age her purposely for who was going to see this footage. Like an attempt to torment the viewer as much as the girl herself. In fact there was an almost overwhelming feeling that this set up, this thing going on here was as much, if not more so, for the benefit of the viewer.


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should be noted that this is chapter one and that you need to purchase another chapter or more to finish book 1 out of 5

  Author reply: Many thanks for your comments. Stories tend to evolve over the writing process. Please note that the majority of my stories over the last 5 years plus, are over 2 parts or more. And I habitually release part 1 first as I finish part 2. If you are concerned about a story, please contact me and I will be pleased to answer any queries - Once again many thanks for taking the time to comment - Stefani Nyghts aka DrkFetyshNyghts

My love-hate relationship with this author's work has, with this book, slid solidly into hate. I've read two of her previous books and one thing hasn't changed with this one: the author has a maddening, idiosyncratic style of almost mindless repetition that nearly demands that you skim rather than read. Here's a sample: "Maggie had never been able to get over the development of Melody. How she had been more advanced than her years. How she had been much like herself. How her own breasts had popped when she was just twelve years old. She would always remember that would Maggie. And how she hadn't been at all surprised when Melody more or less followed the same development path. Mature physically and with the mind always playing catch up." And it's not like this is a once-in-while for emphasis thing. It's constant. The reading is a slog from start to finish. You might ask, knowing this, why read her work? Her previous books delivered in unique fashion lez-dom sexual control and graphic torture with a pretty good look into the heads of torturer and victim. Sadly, this is almost absent from this book. There's a little teaser at the front and a bit at the end, but the middle is a mind-numbing, boring yet grim look into someone going to pieces under pressure. I kept waiting for the good bits that never came. Normally, at the end of book, I'm sad and want more. At the end of this one, it was, "Thank heaven, it's over." The author took a short 70,000 word novel and cut into to novellas so she can sell it as twice the prices. Maybe, just maybe, all the good stuff is in Taken II? I want to know if I can permanently put this author on my never-to-be-read-again list. I'm just not sure it's worth another $7 to find out. 1 out of 5 (Aalok)

  Author reply: Thank you for the time you have spent reveiwing this - I appreciate ALL feedback, as always. My 'style' although evolving hasn't really changed since the Devastation series, which was my first ever published. And that book or series, prided itself on the immersion made possible via repetition. I think my work is meant to be read, alone, curtains closed, all outside influences eradicated. Yes a hard read if you're not immersed but the rewards come if you immerse without question. On pricing, it is based on word count I think, so, apart from a rudimentary difference by having a story split into 2, it make very little difference to me. I tend to write in 2 parts to give readers a breather, as opposed to it being for financial reasons. Once again many thanks for your comments. Please DO read Part 2 of Taken :)

Good book. Storyline similiar to some of his other books but if you liked them you will like this one. 4 out of 5 (SM)

Author Information

\\\"DrkFetyshNyghts writes her hard hitting stories almost as crime novels. The BDSM, the Fetish and the Bondage being the crimes along with the impunity with which the perpetrators operate. This, together with an autobiographical feel and forensic attention to detail, adds a distinctly jagged and disturbing edge to the narrative.\\\"

Hello there, as above, I am a 39 year old Lady writer and I have a \\\'thing\\\' for latex, nylons and heels... all wrapped up in dark brooding bdsm and extreme control (mostly lesbian though not exclusively so). Forced orgasms. Orgasm denial.. and debilitating mental cruelty. I enjoy exploring the dark side and within stories can revel in the no safe words morality. Please visit me at www.drky.co.uk

 

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