Great story  5 out of 5  (girly46)

  Author reply: Glad you liked it. It was enjoyable to write.

Another good story, Erik.  I don't get into cuck elements much, so
some of the wife's "I'm going to do this whether you like it or not
behavior" isn't my favorite.  

What I've enjoyed most about your stories is that the husband and wife
are on the same page and it's not about humilation or ignoring the
husband's wishes.  

I'm looking forward to more.  And speaking of "more", are still you
working on the story you mentioned a little while back in one of your
replies?  You said it's about "I have one coming soon that will go
even further into extremes that I hope you will read and enjoy. It
will have "White Wives" in the title."  I haven't seen one with that
title yet.  5 out of 5  (authoritis)

  Author reply: That book will be the next one I post. 

Thanks for reading my writing. I don't have any experience in the
dom wife, sub hub genre, so I prefer to write about things going in
ways I feel is believable, and that I could see happening. 

Erik, 
I didn't think you took either Candace, Ellen or originally Hannah,
far enough in your stories for them to truly be "black cock sluts". 
My neighbor/friend plays in a band.  It is not unusual for mixed race
couples to show up at the clubs he plays.  There is a distinct
difference, that's noticeable right away, when the woman is her black
man's slut.  Virtually all of the women that appear to be in a BCS
relationship are marked.  Many more visibly than Hannah. 

The last time I saw him play about 2 weeks ago, there were 3 IR
couples there.  Two of them were together and while it wasn't obvious
either of those women were BCS's (they both had 2 visible tatts), it
was obvious the third woman was.  She had a very low scooped neck
dress, with the back scooped to just below her waist.  Her breasts
were huge, obviously fake, DD's or larger, and it was obvious she had
nipple rings.  (BTW, if you do a 3rd story on Hannah, you might want
to add another nipple ring, and maybe other steel.)  She also had 4
visible 1" Chinese characters inked down her spine and tattoo on her
left shoulder.  What really got me was when she noticed a guy standing
about 10 feet down the bar from me staring open mouthed at her, she
licked her lips slowly and showed off a tongue piercing.  She looked
to be 40'ish and very well taken care of, with her "date" about 25-30.
 A BCS for sure.

A  5 out of 5  (authoritis)

  Author reply: I guess we all have different ideas of what makes a black cock slut. I
suspect your definition requires more than my definition. Different
strokes for different folks. 

I think it comes from within the woman herself, that she has that
within her, and it is something that, with proper guidance, she can
allow to spring free, flourish, and be enjoyed by her, her lover, and
her husband. It is something that blossoms, and something that is
amazing to see, and something that awesome to watch evolve. The
evolution is part of the intrigue for me.

It is not something that is forced on her. 

You will find few women in my stories with breast implants--frankly
because I personally don't like the feel of them. 

I just am not interested in sub cuck humiliated husbands, wives
abandoning family to the whim of a dom uncaring black lover, or a
woman doing anything to which she has not given her consent. I do
understand and recognize, especially from the quantity of stories
along that theme I read on the net, that it is a popular genre. 

For me I'd rather write about the part of the interracial
lifestyle that I've seen and observed, to what I know happens and
what could happen easily, and which, in the end, everyone is happy. I
try to take most of my characters there too.  

I've always like the happy endings, in life (and in massages). 

Thanks for reading my writing. 

Brilliant story, I hope that there is further progress for Hannah.  5
out of 5  (girly46)

  Author reply: Yes, Hannah will be progressing even further.

An excellent sequel that drives the story along to new heights and
interracial fantasy. I hope there are more stories of Hannah to come. 
5 out of 5

  Author reply: Thanks for reading about Hannah.

Yes, she does have more adventures coming up. 

The character of Hannah is someone I want to know more about
myself--and sometimes that doesn't come out until I start writing
and do not know where it is going to go myself.

Fantastic story  5 out of 5  (girly46)

  Author reply: Thanks for reading Transforming Hannah Trent. If you wonder what
happens next there is a second book just posted, "The Progression
of Hannah Trent" that takes things deeper into her lifestyle.

 abit OTT but makes a cracking read  5 out of 5  (brum)

  Author reply: Thank you for reading the book. No one has ever called one of my reads
"cracking" before, which brought a smile. Thanks. 

Erik, There doesn't seem to be an easy way to correspond with the
authors here, but I would love to see Candace follow Nicole to CI.  5
out of 5  (authoritis)

  Author reply: Club Indulgence surely beckons Candace in my opinion. 

When my wife read "White Wives of the Black Orchid" the
first time as she finished she looked up and said, "Don't
tell me this place really exists."

"Why?" I asked.

"Tell me," she repeated.

"Why, would you go?" I asked.

"Hell Yes. Where do I sign."

I like these vignettes. Good theme of Kevin and Tiron being "hung like
a horse". However, the editing lets down the flow of prose in some
areas. eg 1st and 3rd person narrative in the same paragraph, wrong
words in places. Overall though a good effort.   4 out of 5  (Fred)

Erik, I've read all three of your stories.  While I like them all,
they lack some black cock slut elements.  My best friend/neighbor
plays in a band.  They often play in affluent suburbs, where there are
a surprising lot of interracial couples.  
The weekend before last was one example.  There were 3 WF/BM couples
present out of maybe 150 people total.  Two of the couples were
together, the other alone.  But they all had one thing in common, the
women were scantilly dressed, which showed off their "master's?"
markings.  All 3 wore tattoos.  Of the two couples together, one of
the women had three tattoos I could see, one on the back of her neck.
one on her left shoulder and an elaborate thing on her left ankle and
foot. Her friend had a half sleeve on her left arm, a barbed wire
tattoo on both ankles and under a very tight, thin shirt it was
obvious that she had nipple piercings.  

But the third woman was the most outstanding, and yes, I mean that in
a literal sense as well.  I don't know what kind of dress you call it,
but both the front and back were scooped provocatively.  Of the three
women, it appeared that she was at once the trophy of a wealthy white
guy, as well as her black lover's slut.  Her breasts were huge (DD or
larger) and fake.  It would have been interesting to know who paid for
them.  Her other mods were quite obviously done at the behest of her
lover.  She had a tattoo on the back of both shoulders, but they were
too covered by the wide shoulder straps to understand exactly what
they said/meant.  She also had 4, one inch plus Japanese Kanje (sp?)
characters tattooed down her spine from between her shoulder blades to
right above the crack of her ass, which was almost exposed. When I
briefly was close enough to her while grabbing a drink at the bar, I
could see something silver gleaming in her mouth when she spoke.  

All in all, these women seem to have gone through a more thorough
"blackening" than your female characters. Something you might want to
consider in future stories, particularly if Candace is going to be
"rented further".  4 out of 5  (authoritis)

  Author reply: First thanks for reading the books, and I understand about taking
things further. I've just added a new book, "The Progression
of Hannah Trent" which gets a bit more into marking, stripping,
etc.

The basics of my books hinge first around what my wife has actually
done, and that we have observed from our actual participation in the
interracial lifestyle. My goal in these stories is to make them
believable first--and having lived quite a few of those "I
can't believe this is happening" moments myself I have
incorporated a lot of conversation and things happening that I've
seen or heard myself when I was there. 

After that I get more into taking things further. 

Also I have one coming soon that will go even further into extremes
that I hope you will read and enjoy. It will have "White
Wives" in the title.

I found myself wanting to rush through to find out what happens in the
later chapters. I love how it escalates with each date--and I knew she
couldn't stop after the 10!  5 out of 5

Now here is a detective I like  5 out of 5

Great read. I like the progression of the story.  I'd love to see a
follow up to see if Candace pursued her "black cock slut" fantasy.  5
out of 5  (sym)

  Author reply: Glad you liked it. A sequel does sound appealing--some scenarios have
already come to mind after your suggestion. Thanks!

If you want to whore your wife out this is a good way to start.  5 out
of 5  (qubert)

  Author reply: You say that like wanting to whore out your wife is a bad thing! : ).
Seriously, I think most husbands want the long told fantasy of a whore
in the bedroom and a lady outside the bedroom. 

Good reading strong and creative story, It held my interest through
out the reading  4 out of 5  (Flash)

  Author reply: Thanks for the compliment. Holding a reader's interest is the always
desired goal, so it is gratifying to know that I accomplished it for
you.